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Every scene possesses its own specific stability of discussion, internal ideas, action, and description.
The precise proportions of every element may vary for various POVs, genres, scenes, standard of temperature, etc., however they are always current.
Why then, for the passion for all plain things Taylor and Seraphina, do we forget this guideline regarding intercourse scenes? Why do we matter your reader towards the (often literal) blow-by-blow description of just just what Seraphina is performing to Taylor and vice versa? Continue reading “A beneficial editor should come straight down on us like a lot of bricks when we get too technical or bogged straight down with unimportant details”